tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post110456199861911297..comments2024-03-18T22:57:04.768-04:00Comments on HEY NATALIE JEAN: A LITTLE EXPERIMENTNataliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13698804808966036834noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-82861519560953847032013-04-22T13:29:43.291-04:002013-04-22T13:29:43.291-04:00This is just amazing! It can be so hard to find wr...This is just amazing! It can be so hard to find writing that sucks you in in just a few pages, but this did it for me. :)Isabelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01196692161705162605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-43011324323635551332011-10-30T21:13:45.132-04:002011-10-30T21:13:45.132-04:00It left me wanting more!It left me wanting more!Jeannie, Kent & Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12840432602740465815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-36422954206303930462011-10-25T17:38:48.003-04:002011-10-25T17:38:48.003-04:00I likes! Such a good story! (And! You used my brot...I likes! Such a good story! (And! You used my brother's name! Brent is a good name, after all...)the ginabeanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08237796696115756778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-66547181554336418312011-10-25T01:37:37.953-04:002011-10-25T01:37:37.953-04:00I loved it!
The detail was so great--from the be...I loved it! <br /><br />The detail was so great--from the beginning I could vividly picture the scene and was immediately drawn in.<br /><br />Great job--keep writing!!!Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18313288835348592303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-68115639704668784382011-10-24T18:51:07.919-04:002011-10-24T18:51:07.919-04:00total awesomesauce, keep it comin!!total awesomesauce, keep it comin!!rebekahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14165529169622035638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-16655834525470653592011-10-24T18:42:35.682-04:002011-10-24T18:42:35.682-04:00You rock. I'm pretending Amy is based on me y...You rock. I'm pretending Amy is based on me you know. I've read you since NYC #1. I think you are am amazing writer. Love love love that you are branching out.Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14638404610316415337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-47583798908235122662011-10-24T18:28:04.207-04:002011-10-24T18:28:04.207-04:00very good! i love how it looped around. your writi...very good! i love how it looped around. your writing often does. flash fiction is so much fun! i am curious, what did you study in college? i'm trying to give my part-time editing and writing career a bigger blogging portion, but my ba in english lit hasn't prepared me, and boy, do i take a long time learning by trial and error. i always like to hear about the paths of fellow writers.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16722228285986947583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-25449333116209281342011-10-24T18:00:20.371-04:002011-10-24T18:00:20.371-04:00I love Blake. He's so funny to talk to wheneve...I love Blake. He's so funny to talk to whenever I'm home and see the Lovins. My parents loved teaching him in Sunday School.Meganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11200518427119344743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-41369675108612938812011-10-24T16:03:40.952-04:002011-10-24T16:03:40.952-04:00loved loved loved it. makes me miss you and blake ...loved loved loved it. makes me miss you and blake and manda. love you!alexandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04536339171766818088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-16459937960714672832011-10-24T13:39:23.336-04:002011-10-24T13:39:23.336-04:00Your ability to craft words and stories together n...Your ability to craft words and stories together never ceases to amaze me. You're so talented. I would buy anything you publish without even reading the book blurb.Brian Ciccotellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03704146620550703022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-72207024911102212742011-10-24T13:02:05.094-04:002011-10-24T13:02:05.094-04:00Awesome writing. Love it!Awesome writing. Love it!Erin aka Conscious Shopperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02055472303320074413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-46485852166874564342011-10-24T12:45:58.829-04:002011-10-24T12:45:58.829-04:00Love it. You're an amazing writer!Love it. You're an amazing writer!Katherine Younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13720545415277256524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-12920558819298652842011-10-24T12:37:23.181-04:002011-10-24T12:37:23.181-04:00Totally captivating from the first sentence. Amaz...Totally captivating from the first sentence. Amazing! And he's so perfectly adolescent, too. Well done!Katie Richinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01484272063098720924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-49156889027543686712011-10-24T12:05:04.345-04:002011-10-24T12:05:04.345-04:00more more more... I'm hooked already.more more more... I'm hooked already..kaitlyn.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06138906234935498418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-28292433029627454992011-10-24T10:23:30.809-04:002011-10-24T10:23:30.809-04:00love it! you are one talented writer...maybe write...love it! you are one talented writer...maybe write a book?! this girl would buy it!meme-and-hehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15288453597688323806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-26792726613353432372011-10-24T09:49:25.717-04:002011-10-24T09:49:25.717-04:00So good. You really are talented. But this was suc...So good. You really are talented. But this was such a tease! I wish I could read what happens next!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02329034470301944500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-56462998904647855302011-10-24T09:27:43.673-04:002011-10-24T09:27:43.673-04:00i really enjoyed your story. i felt so sad for br...i really enjoyed your story. i felt so sad for brent, and I would love to read more and find out something wonderful happened to him. thanks for sharing!rsjablonskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15130788236970040214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-71068749870376112782011-10-24T07:33:11.951-04:002011-10-24T07:33:11.951-04:00this was good. thanks for sharing natalie.this was good. thanks for sharing natalie.colleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11086379448385596577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-10688684510871167232011-10-24T05:59:22.009-04:002011-10-24T05:59:22.009-04:00this is great! I love to write but I really am jus...this is great! I love to write but I really am just no good. I get to aware of what I'm writing and sort of lose track of what I'm trying to say!Amber Leighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01230932328341000318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-56472181075322376492011-10-24T04:35:56.171-04:002011-10-24T04:35:56.171-04:00Hey! Thats coolHey! Thats coolA Daft Scots Lasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01922985143036647579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-36605420086387945332011-10-24T03:44:23.072-04:002011-10-24T03:44:23.072-04:00Oooh, I am a fan!! Do continue!Oooh, I am a fan!! Do continue!Erica & Benjaminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15399474769143867792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-72636875391599246372011-10-24T02:32:45.547-04:002011-10-24T02:32:45.547-04:00I NEED MORE.I NEED MORE.Nancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15856240017196615727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-10901384934492130152011-10-24T02:10:43.702-04:002011-10-24T02:10:43.702-04:00Wow.. this is amazing! I absolutely loved it and t...Wow.. this is amazing! I absolutely loved it and think you are an incredible writer.<br /><br />--ShelbyShelbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06453117816726141542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-76578668926404598182011-10-24T00:32:10.935-04:002011-10-24T00:32:10.935-04:00Nice job...Nice job...Hygge Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07518356793147594574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2487616434221255778.post-67356726010061998152011-10-24T00:18:35.072-04:002011-10-24T00:18:35.072-04:00Loved it! Hopefully it will inspire me to finally ...Loved it! Hopefully it will inspire me to finally start writing my own stuff. But you're right it is nerve-wracking.Krystal Pearsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16211579995531916835noreply@blogger.com